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This term in class we have be working on our speeches mine is about why we should keep our beaches clean and tidy. I hope you enjoy reading my speech topic.
Hi Ruby, I liked your blog post! I think you are doing it on a great topic! But maybe before you put your speech in you should add more writing, like why did you chose this topic or what do you talk about in your three paragraphs. But overall I think you did a great job!
Hi Ruby, Your speech topic is a great topic and you know alot about it. Maybe next time think about the lay out of you blog post and check your spelling. This reminds me of my speech in room 5 but yours is much better. Did you change you topic or was this the first topic that came to mind. Great post! Poppy
Hi Ruby,
ReplyDeleteI liked your blog post! I think you are doing it on a great topic! But maybe before you put your speech in you should add more writing, like why did you chose this topic or what do you talk about in your three paragraphs. But overall I think you did a great job!
Hi Ruby,
ReplyDeleteYour speech topic is a great topic and you know alot about it. Maybe next time think about the lay out of you blog post and check your spelling. This reminds me of my speech in room 5 but yours is much better. Did you change you topic or was this the first topic that came to mind. Great post!
Poppy